Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming.Why is global warming a problem?What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
Endangering our planet in specific case such as global warming is one of the big problem which is caused by some of the developed nations. However, as humankind we should have consciousness to our natural condition. I personally believe, there are several problems and some practical steps can be solved.
Perhaps, one larger worriment we ought to contemplate is that the imbalancing of the temperature and the climate which is the huge considerateness due to the successive of higher heath nowadays. Theoritically, as long as it is produced with the carbon and other harmful emission gas, it can make the air quality to be worse. Moreover, this pollution level may bring about the various of respiratory problem, such as asthma, cough, and lung alergy which is unhealthy to people to breath. Other problem is that appearing the depletion of ozon layers of the earth atmosphere can be obvious to foresee the melting level of the south and north poles. If the snow was gone, those would cause numerous impacts in the wildlife habitat – extinction of polar bear, penguins– and ecosystem – dissapearing of Antarctica, Greenland, other mountain glaciers and the rising of sea levels–.
Turning to possible solutions, the biggest step would be to improve by reducing the amount of carbon dioxide and other gases in trapping heat on the planet is that the increasing of the developed country sensitifity to the restoring of oxigent level must be applied from the diminishing of the deforestation cases. It is undeniable fact that wherever rain forest is becoming the center of lung to our planet, this disertification should firmly be controled, particularly the wood production in Amazon, United States. Overseeing the woods can be enforced by managing between trees where those are ready to be cut and those are still growing. Furthermore, Inventing the new technology for developed country is mandatory thing to create the alternative energy which can be friendly to our circumstances. Not only does the replacement fuel contain of lower carbon emission, but also it consits of the biomass energy, geothermal energy, and hydroelectric energy sources. perhaps, those can be used in throughout the world as the eco-fuel to all transportations, for instance car, bus, motorbike, and truck.
Overall, I perceive that the diminishing of exhausted fumes should be managed with the strict supervision in the forest and the creating of the alternative fuels is also the most effective way which can reduce global warming.
- Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming.Why is global warming a problem?What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming? 78
- The consumption of the resources on the earth is increasing at an alarming rate and above a dangerous level What are the causes of this What can be done to reduce it 89
- Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming.Why is global warming a problem?What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming? 84
- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order to for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22604422604 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98256417827 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572481572482 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5694649303 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234196247564 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712543573155 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596354794412 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146420141356 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552569951994 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.