In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
there is no denying that there is a significant rise in the number of elderly people in the world, especially in industrialised countries. Unluckily, it exerts many negative effects on society as a whole. this essay will analyse these consequences and recommend some practical methods to handle this phenomenon.
it can be said that there are various impacts of the aging population. One of the anticipated effects is that this leads to the rise of the quantity of dependent people. In other words, there are more people who is not of working age and, otherwise, less residents managing to participate in labour market. The state of shrinking workforce may be a significant factor influencing negatively on national economy. another adverse impact is that the elderly population may impose a financial burden on social welfare fund. this is due to the fact that people at the advanced age would claim pension benefits while pay a lower tax. When the number of the elderly increase, the goverment must raise tax to balance the welfare spending. Needless to say, adults who is at working age would pay more money to shoulder this tax burden.
However, there are some effective ways that we could carry out to tackle the adverse effects mentioned above. Firstly, the authority should follow policies aimed at rising the retirement age, perhaps frome 65 to 70. Take the country of Japan as an example. In this country, the elderly, if their health condition remain to be good, can continue working in certain job such as taxi driver, security guard or even manager. another solution could be taken is encouring immigration from other countries, espesially places having young population like China, Vietnam or Brazil. To be more precise, this extra number of foreign workers will expand the workforce. As a result, domestic companies would be provided with better human resource, thereforce, they are more likely to grow faster. In general, this is a considerable force for the development of national economy.
In conclusion, it can be said that aging population brings many negative influences. Nevertheless, if these solutions mention above are implemented, this situation will be mitigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19101123596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77549696652 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592696629213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2048708423 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208201999084 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575922057661 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390741605977 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126918244002 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201397029054 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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