In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will
this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Nowadays, more and more people tend to live longer all around the world. Although there are several negative impacts on societies and individuals, I suppose that some solutions could be taken to mitigate the increase in life expectancy.
It is clear that this tendency will have some drawbacks for a nation. Firstly, the companies will slowly adapt to modern information technology because of the shortage in the human resource which does not have enough younger people. Moreover, younger labors can lack the number of opportunities to find jobs if these positions are occupied by the older one. Secondly, because of aging populations, the baby-born ratio will drop dramatically and it will make this situation more serious in future society. For example, Japan is one of the countries that has the lowest baby-born ratio in the world, and this tendency impacts significantly to its economy in recent years.
Therefore, there are several solutions can help us to resolve this burden. The companies have to create more jobs and positions in the workplace for younger people to reduce the unemployed ratio. Besides, governments should encourage people to bear to increase the young population in their nation. Furthermore, authorities should permit older people who want to retire soon to have places for the younger ones. For instance, in Vietnam, the number of people who aged 55-60 love to quit their jobs and give these chances for graduated students, although the retiring age is 65.
In conclusion, in spite of aging populations have some disadvantages, I think that several ways can help us to tackle this situation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20152091255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73312893646 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7310886773 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153592413162 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538421972132 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589159535371 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992603721077 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525945440911 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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