It is true that there is an increase in the average life span in the developed countries. Although there will undoubtedly be some negatives consequences of this trend, governments can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As life expectancy is increasing, several related problems can be anticipated. When the number of old people increases, the amount of money spending on caring for them rise, which leads to a climbing grant. As a result, governments are undergone pressure of assessing their expenditures, so they can allocate the financial budgets of their countries logically. Because when a large part spends on health caring, several social problems, such as education, environment, military defending, are less taken seriously.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, governments could increase the retiring age. As more healthcare systems appear, living standards are improved and they have the ability to perform their jobs in the older ages. As a result, more contributions to the economy are expected and taxes giving from their action are recorded. Another option would be to encourage people to conceive. This measure decreases the average age of the population by increasing births, which results in more working labor later on. For example, in Japan, as this country has had an aging population for years, its government has been making a huge effort on encouraging young people to get married and give births. The reason is that it is expected that such a method could solve a problem of shortage of working labor now in this country. Thus, the economy can flourish as this factor is one of the determinants in developing the country.
In conclusion, when the age population happens, several issues may arise. Fortunately, two possible methods have been proposed to solve these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27424749164 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82291286398 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9214830036 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7647058824 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260708306539 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788330957725 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636438805638 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138591757248 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745412896498 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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