Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that technological developments have devastating effects on the environment. for example motor vehicles pollute the air and using pesticide in farming contaminate the lands and water resources. From the perspective of some people, the only way to tackle these problems is that people adopt a simpler life. I agree that simpler lives may mitigate environmental issues but I believe technological advances could solve the problems caused by it.
Some people believe that in order to prevent environmental concerns originated from technology development, we must live simple lives and rely less on technology. For example, we could walk or cycle rather than driving a car or reducing the consumption of electricity that’s could alleviate air pollution problems.
But I would argue that it is true that encouraging people to have simpler lives could be beneficial to some extent but new technologies have become an integral part of our lives and it is impractical to convince people to stop using them. I believe a better solution is investing in green technologies. For example to solve the problems mentioned above, replacing fossil fuel power plants with clean and renewable energy sources like solar or wind power plants which could reduce the number of greenhouse gas emissions in the atmosphere. The electric car is a promising technology that could replace the cars running on fossil fuels that could eliminate exhaust fumes. diminishing the use of pesticides that are used in farms to control the insect pest populations by using genetic engineering.
In conclusion, it is true that encourage people to change their current lifestyle helps to prevent environmental issues but an effective solution is technology improvements to make it cleaner and greener.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
...devastating effects on the environment. for example motor vehicles pollute the air ...
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Suggestion:
...hat people adopt a simpler life. I agree that simpler lives may mitigate environm...
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Suggestion: Diminishing
...els that could eliminate exhaust fumes. diminishing the use of pesticides that are used in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3665480427 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99661033665 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5552619207 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32088034981 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11850574617 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112159548455 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200055267866 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113393446879 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.