Developments in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The development of technology at high speed pulled along with the severe problems in the global environment and these matters threat directly to the existence of mankind. In order to solve environmental problems, some people believe that living simpler would be an effective solution, others believe that technology would be the solution for this problem. In my opinion, I believe that humans only can solve global environmental issues by combining both these solutions flexibly.
On the one hand, a simple living style allows humans to reduce the consumption of natural resources. For instance, this lifestyle encourages people to walk or use public transport instead of using private vehicles. These activities reduce the burden of fossil fuel which allows mankind to develop in the long term. However, the minimization of living styles cannot solve the garbage problem when the number of people nowadays is huge, and the amount of garbage people waste in natural environments is countless.
On the other hand, technology could solve the garbage problem when some researchers are developing a worm that can eat plastics and become food for animals. In addition, the development of technology allows people to create sustainable fuels replacing fossil fuels nowadays. Some types of energy can be mentioned as solar, wind, or sea flow energy. These types of energy can reduce the amount of CO2 wasted by in the environment and solve the greenhouse effect. However, applying technologies to solve global environmental problems would take a long time. Meanwhile, these issues need to be solved thoroughly and immediately so as not to affect people's lives in the future.
In conclusion, each solution has its own strengths and weaknesses. In addition, environmental problems are complex, humans cannot solve these issues only by applying one method. They need to use the strengths and weaknesses of both solutions flexibly in order to solve global environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36129032258 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83966992557 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8362159693 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433177144118 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135104966824 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987486321598 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271799748923 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106232885133 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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