Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Health issues attract much attention nowadays. Therefore, some governors expand public sports facilities to increase general health. However, some people believe that other measures need to be increased due to the small effects of sports facilities. In this essay, I will discuss both views on this problem and give my own opinion on why I stand with the second one.
On the one hand, due to the increasing number of people nowadays. The space for the living of each person is narrowing down, so citizens do not have enough space to play sports. Therefore, people would not have a chance to interact with the sport they like, so if the governors extend the sports facilities, it would allow people to attend some sports they are interested in and improve public health.
On the other hand, expanding public sports facilities would not be equivalent to increasing public health. One’s health situation only be improved when they do sports. Therefore, besides extending public sports fields, some other activities are necessary including organizing more competitions or sports events to encourage the citizens to attend outside activities. It also provides the environment for people to interact with one’s who have the same interests. Finally, education also plays a vital role in improving public health, by implementing some courses of events that show the benefits of well-being situation and the negative effects of being a couch potato which also attracts more people to play sports.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that public sports affect people’s health hugely. However, some activities need to be organized such as sports events or competitions to encourage citizens to play sports to improve their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28363636364 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67118075232 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9140540904 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414976980246 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156656557321 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908525504647 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278090563953 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749711321175 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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