Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
We have a better life with the development of technology. Also, it caused the environmental problem such as air pollution during the development, but the technology can solve the environmental problems in some ways. It leads people to think how to solve the environment problem.
Some people think we can choose the simpler life to protect the environment, because A simpler life will result in less daily waste and less pollution. For example, we can use few electronic devices. When the demand of electronic devices is decreased, the manufactories will decrease the production and the pollution that comes with manufacturing also is decreased. In addition, cars emit the waste gas, and it is harmful to the environment, because the product of burning fuels is noxious. But if we choose to walk or ride a bike to a place, it will decrease the pollution.
However, the technology also can help us to solve the environmental problem. If we have a better technology, we can find a better way to produce something with less pollution. For example, we can use wind or water to create the electricity to instead of using fuels. Also, we can produce something new to absorb the pollution by new technology. For example, we have invented a machine to absorb the air pollution. London had serious air pollution before. After using the new technology to help to solve the air problem, the air in London became fresher than before.
So, in my opinion, I think the science and technology can help us to solve the environmental problem and we can have a convenient and efficient life with technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96005412771 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437037037037 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1884009765 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347877864283 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123943746937 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123372061485 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273849138322 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123127640991 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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