The diagrams show the cross-sections of two tunnels, one joining France and Italy and the other joining two Japanese island
The diagrams illustrate two tunnels in different places namely MontBlanc and Railway Tunnel. Mont- Blanc was built on France and Italy from 1957 to 1965. Other tunnel is based on two island in Japan and constructing at the period 1946-1988.
Overall, it is clear that while the tunnel located in France and Italy had the depth higher than the other in Japan but its length was completely shorter than in Japan.
The first diagram gives the constructive picture about the across Mont-Blanc Road tunnel. This road is long 11.6 km, from eastern Italy to the western France. Accounted from the lowest point to the highest point of this tunnel, It takes around 3,5 km.
The remaining picture shows the Railway Tunnel road, which was constructed in Japan took over than 40 years. As can seen from the picture, its length is totally longer than Mont-Blanc road,with closed to 54 km, linking Hakodate City, Hokkaido island with Aomori City and Japanese island. Another point is the depth of sea levels in this tunnel is 24m, quite special to compare with the tunnel road in France and Italy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'island' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'islands'.
Suggestion: islands
...7 to 1965. Other tunnel is based on two island in Japan and constructing at the period...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...n Japan took over than 40 years. As can seen from the picture, its length is totally...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...h is totally longer than Mont-Blanc road,with closed to 54 km, linking Hakodate City,...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kodate City, Hokkaido island with Aomori City and Japanese island. Another point ...
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Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with the tunnel road in France and Italy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23490426783 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8614579751 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151011656616 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668606814819 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441625270275 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10130712297 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633509907967 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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