Different people have different opinions regarding retirement age. What factors should be considered while deciding retirement age?
Currently, the suitable retirement age has become a controversial issue and there is no unanimity in the opinion of the people. Age to retire from job varies from area to area and job to job. The things that are to be taken in account on deciding the retirement age are discussed further.
First of all, the most prominent factor for deciding the retirement age is nature of the job. There are many jobs that are physically demanding like military, mines and so on. Keeping old ones in these jobs can be dangerous as people in old age cannot withstand physical exertion and may lead to some kind of accident. On the other hand, for certain positions experience is an asset. To illustrate, in jobs like teaching, judiciary and politics experienced people are more valued. So, people in such profession continue their job up to their seventies.
Yet another factor that cannot be given nelson’s eye is the level of unemployment in the country. With high unemployment level in the country keeping old ones on job would deny the new and young to avail the jobs, unemployed youth is detrimental for country’s economy. Also, number of skilled is very low limited in certain areas, thus discontinuing the existing one without adequate replacement for the job seems impossible. In such case there is no point to force old ones to quit job very early.
From the above analysis, it becomes evident that it is not possible to set a particular age for retirement because the requirement of different jobs varies greatly. Also, physical and mental capacities vary from individual to individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, thus, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93680297398 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82887171272 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9729029906 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219762140493 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814650004678 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925793982598 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147647785975 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914808166564 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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