Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the fast-paced life of the contemporary world, it has become far more prevalent that young people frequently head to the shopping centers in their leisure time. The positive and negative impacts of this trend on youth have become a hot topic among people. This essay discusses each point of view before reaching some reasoned conclusion.
Firstly, rising demand for shopping, from the social and economic angles, can be seen as a form of commercial promotion. To explain, recently, shopping has ranked among favorite activities for teenagers and young adults since they have tendencies to easily get tempted by new items, and they willing spend on anything that can satisfy their crave for shopping. Therefore, the more products the malls sell, the more profits they gain, which are beneficial for the national tax system as well as the promising economy. Secondly, on an individual level, engaging in regular shopping can bring them much joy. For example, a woman might have a great experience and a sense of satisfaction after completing a shopping trip.
However, along with positive there are some negative impacts of this trend that cannot be given nelson’s eye. Firstly, the youth might suffer from symptoms of shopaholic or shopping addictions. Moreover, young people waste their time at such places and less likely to participate in outdoor activities with their friends or family. This also affects their health and reduces the quality time for their social relationships in the long run. Secondly, from society and economic point of view; many shopping addicts face financial problems, and they stress out with debt. To illustrate, in some cases, they simply max out their credit cards, and face problems in paying back the banks.
To recapitulate, the increasing spending in shopping malls by the youth is beneficial for economy meanwhile detrimental for individuals if not monitored.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27868852459 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66271901656 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2911638356 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240006867265 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727707519197 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513520542295 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135779832239 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665708789234 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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