A car is a necessity of life and one cannot imagine life without it nowadays. However, owning a car is not enough and has its own merits and demerits.
These days, almost every house has a car. Some might own it to flaunt their status while the rest of the people need it for their day to day work. One of the most important reason to have a car is to commute to work. As is seen, it’s is not easy to get a job in nearby places. People commit to travel long distances just to have an appropriate job with rewarding salaries. A striking example that comes to my mind is of my cousin who commutes to Luton airport despite living in Feltham in the hope that he will have a promising future as a pilot. As a reward of his commitment, he will be starting his job as a pilot from September. He needs a car to travel as it would be unimaginable to travel by the public transport every day for work.Also, people normally shop once a week due to their busy schedule. When we shop for the whole week, the items would not be easy to be dragged around in public transportation. Hence, car comes handy in this situation.
On the other hand, having a car comes with its own price. Owning a car is not enough. With cars comes a lot of responsibilities.it is unanimously agreed that car needs fuel to run and fuel is not cheap. Furthermore, the car has to go for maintenance every few months. Additionally, we have to have a permit in order for a car to run on the roads which will cost money as well.Even if we have all the means to drive a car, the greatest responsibility would lie on ourselves towards the people and animals on the road while we drive as every life matters. No matter how many years of driving experience we have had, it is mandatory for us to be responsible drivers.
Congestion is another factor that has to be considered. A well known example would be of people who are suffering from the traffic due to the introduction of more cars every year. The sound and air pollution caused by cars to the environment is a crucial thing as it is one of the main reason for global warming. This thing matters as the very Mother Earth we live on is suffering.
All in all, I concede that although having a car has its own perks, we will always have to be bear in mind that we have a responsible towards other people and the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also
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Suggestion: Even
...the roads which will cost money as well.Even if we have all the means to drive a car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31376975169 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6243493701 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469525959368 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9583139446 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0869565217 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230306193306 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784140780635 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637766507861 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145358044039 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633366629579 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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