Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of media
In this technological era, we humans are making use of media and gaining vast impacts of it. I can hardly deny that some of them are positive while others are negative.
On the one hand, living in a media-rich society creates several opportunities for our lives. The most observable advantage I can list out is in regard to spreading the information. To be more specific, people now can easily share and find useful information globally due to the prevalence of social media and a large number of users. For example, the person who is living in Vietnam will post a status on Facebook- a form of social media about the culture and customs of the Vietnamese. On the basis of that, others can reach that post and learn more about Vietnamese if they are in favour of this country thanks to the influence of Facebook.
On the other hand, humans can be negatively affected by the media in a wide range of aspects. What stands out as the biggest issue is a loss of privacy. People may easily be theft their personal information from others because once we are on media, we have to share our private information. For example, recently there are some traps like clicking on the link to get prizes and then the hackers will take our personal accounts in which include full of important information. The consequences can be varied, in the worst cases, the thief may open our bank or use our identity for different purposes.
To recapitulate, I truly believe there would be many advantages besides disadvantages when using media. Their efficiency has greatly improved our lives; however, the negative impacts are undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79928315412 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69562169661 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1079966471 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161661258294 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584471863703 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752454115739 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110602005504 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637651807842 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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