Write a paragraph about the effects of migration in big cities
These days, thanks to the vast of job opportunities and brilliant quality of life cities bring, many people decide to move out of their home town and seek a new life in urban areas. this type of migration triggers a myriad of problems for us. The most observable outcome is housing deficiency. As a result of population density, the need for housing is drastically accelerating at a fierce speed when it is limited space in an area. this is obviously a serious problem as large amounts of dwellers are lacking accommodation and slams are continuously appearing. traffic congestion can be acknowledged as the second effect of migrations. In megacities, traffic jam stands out as a traditional activity because of the frequency it happens and thereby, being a hindrance of peoples’ lives. Residents in cities are usually stuck and miss their business as a consequence of the traffic, especially in rush hours, humans can be standstill until 2 to 3 hours. Finally, environmental deterioration is also labelled as one serious result of this uncontrollable movement. many types of pollution are turned up like air, noise or water pollution which have a direct effect on people's health. To recapitulate, there is some exclusively negative influence of migration namely housing, traffic, and environmental impacts. However, cities are now taking action and ceaselessly finding the possible solutions to tackle this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
...own and seek a new life in urban areas. this type of migration triggers a myriad of ...
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...ed when it is limited space in an area. this is obviously a serious problem as large...
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...ers are lacking accommodation and slams are continuously appearing. traffic congestion can be acknowledged...
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Suggestion: Traffic
...n and slams are continuously appearing. traffic congestion can be acknowledged as the s...
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Suggestion: Many
...result of this uncontrollable movement. many types of pollution are turned up like a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, so, still, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25110132159 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1312507591 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660792951542 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7179078578 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101332172264 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330243909036 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294312967588 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101332172264 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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