Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
In this modern any ambitious scholar would like to pursue higher studies in abroad,to be precise any developed nation would be an ideal choice for a student with aspiration. hens millions of students with eyes full of dream and heart filled with hope work hard to accomplish the mission of achieving higher degree. As a result the encounter numerous advantages and disadvantages.
firstly it's not easy to break social ties and leave the homeland at once to smoothly walk towards a bright future. adaptation is a huge talents that one needs to overcome at a faster place to settle down in myrth. in addition one can be hesitant to communicate with the unfamiliar people with distinct ideology and perception.
How ever, despite everyevery possible hurdles and obstacles the worth of a foreign degree in homeland is awe-aspiring. Henceforth any pre conceptualization or assumption of failure due to constant struggle can slower the place of the journey.here after arises the merit of studying abroad where one is completely self dependent realising the true meaning of life along with its twists and turns leaving no room for any loopholes as handsome sum of tuition fee paid by parents progressively knock the backdoor of conscience.
in conclusion any step in life will offer two diverse pool of choices with merits and demerits. The decision making power and working out the unique equation of life is the main challenge. One both the advantages and disadvantages are balanced out, success will be waving at the other spectrum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10317460317 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86690352165 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3002016976 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.909090909 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115243260752 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382197163134 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532298380994 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610471868108 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377385928151 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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