Discuss the impact of computer games on young minds.
Computer games are popular for decades now and many of households have at least one. However, it can be seen that these games causes social, educational and personal problems of several kinds both to youngsters and society.
To begin with, computer games have been known for the several adverse effects on the children. Firstly, youngsters spend great deal of time in front of computer and do not get enough time for playing, studying, and socializing. So, the skills needed in order to interact are not being nurtured. Thus, children tend to be anti social in life and it is big loss to society. Moreover, studies show that generation of young are growing less than previous generations due to lack of exercise. Also, they are suffering from many problems like obesity, diabetes and are more prone to diseases owing to unhealthy lifestyle.
In addition, animated games not only affect the children physically but psychologically too. It is the fact that most loved and applauded games are violent that include brutal fighting scenes. Such games encourage violence in young minds, like it instills violent language in children. The aggression that develops while playing such games also turns out in the form of crime sometimes. Yet another impact of such games is that children start being to stay busy with their gaming consoles and keep themselves solitary, consequently they lack in interaction and social skills.
To conclude, it is easy to imagine the effects of such games on youngsters. So, to make children grow up as well adjusted members of society, these games should be more tightly controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, at least, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10943396226 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61068265734 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.05328601 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256342122952 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771292712092 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607695377801 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141026477224 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058688022332 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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