Discuss reasons and solutions of terrorism.
Nowadays, frustration among people, communities, and societies is rising each passing day which gives birth to the activities like terrorism. At present, there is no internationally accepted definition of terrorism. Generally, it refers to those acts that are intended to create fear to achieve an ideological goal. Terrorists target or disregard the safety of common citizen. This essay discusses the reasons behind such activities and suggests some solutions to the situation as well.
To begin with, the biggest culprit behind the terrorism is frustration among the people as they face discrimination on the basis of religious, social, or political issues. When such issues arise and are not resolved by the concerned authorities lead people with no resort except vandalism. To explain, suppressing the right to expression is very hazardous for the society as the suppressed find more violent ways to express their feelings. Case in point, many social and religious minorities in India take help of armed agitations because they think they cannot expect justice from government.
Yet, one cannot ignore the fact that terrorists are not born, and are made by society. So, it is possible to control the menace effectively with the combined efforts of government and public. Firstly minorities must be given adequate facilities so that they do not feel out of mainstream of society. Also, stringent laws must be enforced against the use of arms and ammunition. Otherwise, security and sovereignty of nation will be at stake.
In conclusion, those who exhibit aggressive ways to gain their goals should be punished at any cost. Only then safety of country can be ensured and citizens can function independently and fearlessly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, then, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36263736264 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91172619681 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673992673993 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7011804788 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104535277047 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293567472526 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746737403638 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613478844729 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106257652844 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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