Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is thought by some people that television has hindered the contact among family and friends. Although I agree that, this type of media draws people closer together for some reasons.
On the one hand, TV set has several negative impacts on maintaining communication among people. First, watching television shift the focus of life among family members. For example, during dinner, parents and children tend to watch TV as an alternative to the conversation with others, resulting in a decrease in the affection of family members. Second, TV program keeps individuals indoor instead of going out to play. In other words, when it comes to favorite shows, people often reject the invitation of friends in order to stay home, which gradually causes a crack in the relationship.
On the other hand, this kind of home entertainment also has benefits in interacting people together. To begin with, news on television creates more common topics for people to discuss. For instance, by watching quiz shows together, friends can have a good chance of debate the questions with others, which not only helps them feel more connected but also strengthens the relationships. Moreover, watch tv help individuals solve the problem in their relationships. According to a professor of psychology, watching comedies about friends or family would help couples forget the quarrel in a short time, making all the problems less rigid and more comfortable.
In conclusion, although television has a detrimental effect on communication among people, there are several advantages of TV in connecting individuals in society.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-08-12 | JennyLee | 78 | view |
| 2021-08-12 | JennyLee | 73 | view |
| 2021-08-11 | JennyLee | 61 | view |
| 2020-02-05 | hungnguyen2712 | 11 | view |
| 2014-02-03 | danny oktanto | 77 | view |
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for the charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- spoken communication is more powerful than written communication 78
- Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems Some people say they should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... According to a professor of psychology, watching comedies about friends or famil...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33464566929 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93366267876 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8491218471 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146354464891 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550568816916 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429756198402 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946729790487 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158269378976 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.