Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country.
In a society where technology is globalized, advertisement plays a crucial role in our daily life. Advertisement is not limited to commercial products; it is also helpful in promoting nations. This fact is supported by several examples.
For a country, tourism is one of the most important sources of earning. Through advertisements, people from all over the world can explore tourist destinations in a country. Ads focusing on homestays, resorts, restaurants, and taxi services help the tourists to travel safely around different locations.
Advertisement about educational institutions attracts international students. Countries like US, UK, and Canada are admitting foreign students in large numbers. Here the role of advertisement cannot be neglected. Information regarding stay, scholarships, etc. can be made available to everyone in the form of pamphlets or brochures.
India is famous for its Ayurveda tradition. Foreign travelers are visiting India for getting Ayurveda treatment. In order to attract more people, a campaign on international media can be done.
Employment seekers significantly benefit from advertisements. People are migrating to foreign countries which have a large number of job openings in various sectors.
Thus in my viewpoint, advertising is the best option for a better understanding of a country.
- The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. 67
- The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at the risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to to ensure the survival o 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...of job openings in various sectors. Thus in my viewpoint, advertising is the bes...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or a better understanding of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, thus, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81313131313 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4063363357 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3703446783 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7058823529 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6470588235 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112945005071 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323104789425 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034561308791 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527085729799 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320654039281 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.39 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.23 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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