Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? children should be required to help with household task as soon as they are able to do so. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children are sensible and flexible, in terms of obeying the commands from elders. Many people have an opinion that guardian should use these characteristics and involve them in basic household activities which learn them few important lessons of life. I personally agree with this argument and present my views in the following paragraph.
First of all, children can learn important habits by helping the parents in household duties. They can learn principle of time management, the importance of the task and stress management. For example, rearrange the bedroom after wakeup every morning helps them to understand discipline and manners. These kinds of tasks bring many positive changes in their life which can be proven as a game changer in their professional career. lastly, they will learn the habit of helping the others in society and friend circle.
Additionally, After all, Knowledge is power. The student can gain some valuable knowledge by helping in the regular home activities. That knowledge may be used to control real-life circumstances which are not covered by any books or school. For Instant, students who are doing task of purchasing basic items for the home can learn the nitty-gritty of the shopping and know how to spend money wisely. Moreover, if they will have vast knowledge than they will become fearless and do not seek any help from others in the forthcoming future.
In conclusion, As household works bring lots of positive changes in terms of habit and knowledge, It is totally worth to throw them in household work after a certain age.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16115702479 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73482862662 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4483910084 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17719571307 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560316698752 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341092346443 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942108252893 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333286827867 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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