Do you think English will remain a global language despite globalization? Discuss your views with examples.
Nowadays, the question whether Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years or not has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that modern communication is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of this subject.
To begin with, it is a common belief that smartphones and the Internet play a vital role in societies. First and foremost is that earlier people had to visit together to convey their message, but now they just click a button and the message is delivered easily at any corner of the world. Secondly, the internet has made our lives so convenient especially for overseas students to make a video and audio chat with their family as well as it gives us this opportunity to broaden our horizon in terms of medical and educational fields. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the personal safety apps in smartphones provide us a GPS tracking system to go home safety even midnight. A group of scientists, working at a prestigious university expressed that new methods of communication have made we achieve more prosperous in the last 10 years.
However, there is no doubt that new communication provides us with various negative points. It can be taken into account that the majority of criminals are rooted in Internet and cellphones. Moreover, mobile phones have caused people get introvert. For instance, there is mounting evidence that proves, the Internet comprises of a wide variety of unpleasant programs from violence to sex contents.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that promoting communication must be taken into consideration. Since every garden may have weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
- Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 80
- There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it? 78
- The environment we live in is in danger. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? 11
- Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing, skydiving, bungee jumping or not? What are the reasons for that? 80
- The use of newspaper will be less important in future Do you agree or disagree with this statement Explain with reasons and examples 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
Nowadays, the question whether Communication has changed significantly...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... in the last 10 years or not has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...ting evidence that proves, the Internet comprises of a wide variety of unpleasant programs f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14098360656 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99739921306 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63606557377 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3973934454 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289731741759 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100016067216 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155476570026 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0153485940565 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00899835287811 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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