Due to the development and rapaid expansion of supermarket in some countries. Many small, local business are unable compete some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
The big markets and supermarket in the modern society is increasing day by day. there is direct and indirect influence on the local business leading to the degradation of economic condition of existing communities. The reasons behind the closure of local business are as follows:
The dominance of business hub is influencing the communities. The big corporate house have more than enough resources and strategies. Therefore, they are more involved in the societies with small daily stuffs to large sophisticated products which increases their revenue. While, these income are received by prohibiting the small business. they have wide range of products and these products are widespread. Eventhough, they are not directly related to the closing of small shops and business, but there is probability that majority of people are attracted towards the supermarket. For example, with the establishment of Bhatbhateni supermarket, the locals are buying a lot of daily requirements from those big corporates resulting in the loss of revenue of the local shops.
Due to the direct involvement of this big markets, people are shifting their source of consumption behaviour. Likewise, publics tends to buy from those shops if they have little money or they need in credit. those behaviour effects the local producers and small business hubs. Similarly, those small business persons will have little turnover leading to economic deficient or crisis. Hence, the economic built up of the society is disturbed. rich becomes more rich and poor becomes more poor. Thus, this phenomenon leads to the voilence and unrest in the civil society.
To sum up, the invovement of big business house will leads to the disintegration of economics of the society. The gap between the classes of socient may increase and at last, civil unrest in inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34364261168 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86637903383 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7046827805 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219018242393 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687163249506 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846391818302 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142781792197 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692023497636 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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