Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree?
Commodities are one of the basic needs of every one of us. In some areas of the world, supermarkets are growing and more competitive which overshadows the mini-stores in some districts. Some people agree that declining these stop-shops stores may cause problems to local people in the community. It is certainly true that it can damage the livelihood of local individuals as they are apparently more reliance on small businesses.
Most of the locals preferred to choose small stores to purchase quick items such as instant goodies and products as it saves time and more convenient to access rather than the bigger stores like Carrefour located inside the Malls. In addition, as well as the customers, owners of these minimarts rely greatly on small business for their daily income survival. For instance, The group of Al Maya stop-shops where located in different areas in Dubai, are heavily packed with customers during specific rush-hour of the day. They offer inexpensive yet limited choices to buyers as it has small spaces to accommodate a variety of products.
Admittedly, some shoppers opted to go to huge and popular stores which can provide standard products and a wider selection of choices for much more satisfying shopping as it gives the people more chances to select and opportunity to enjoy a variety of items.
Moreover, the supermarkets such as Carrefour are widely known and it is readily available any time of the day as some of the branches operate 24/7. It can also cover all the insufficiency that local small stores has.
In conclusion, small local business has no chance of winning over the well-known supermarkets that has outrageous service of commodities for the public but it has its disadvantages that mini-markets are capable of which should not be taken for granted and neglect its purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 114, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...eadily available any time of the day as some of the branches operate 24/7. It can also cove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08637873754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79981109631 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8536959836 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.583333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198028844568 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733717745938 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498894861743 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111658171047 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514665154534 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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