Earlier technological developments have more benefit in the lives of ordinary people than recent developments will ever have. To what extent do you agree or diagree
Although, some people believed that older forms of technology are more beneficial than the latest ones. I strongly disagree with this opinion due to the advantages the latest developments offer.
There are so many attributes to the latest technology than the old forms, the most important is availability and easy-to-operate machines across different professions so as to ease man labour and fasten production when necessary. For example, during the recent COVID-19 pandemic, China manufactured Robot to attend to patients showing symptoms to prevent contact and spread of the disease in humans.
Other attribute is the availability of multifuctional pocket friendly handsets that are readily affordable to ease communication. It can serve as radio, television, camera and different applications can be downloaded on it to ease acessibility unlike the archaic cell phone that was not durable and the only function was to make call. Infact, recent cellphones can perform same function like a computer as almost all computer applications now have version that worked perfectly on phone.
In conclusion, technology is positively impacting people in all areas of life. Despite different believe on whether or not the older technology have more benefit than the recent ones, I believe recent technology is solving many arising problems and contributing to economic growth.
- Earlier tehnological developments have more benefits in the lives of ordinary people than recent technology will have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Earlier technological developments have more benefit in the lives of ordinary people than recent developments will ever have To what extent do you agree or diagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Although, some people believed that older forms ...
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Suggestion:
... forms of technology are more beneficial than the latest ones. I strongly disagre...
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...e machines across different professions so as to ease man labour and fasten production w...
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...sion, technology is positively impacting people in all areas of life. Despite dif...
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Suggestion: belief
...in all areas of life. Despite different believe on whether or not the older technology ...
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Suggestion: whether
...s of life. Despite different believe on whether or not the older technology have more benefit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58851674641 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06238785315 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.008592837 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.777777778 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186542151026 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699373771098 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646216874613 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112685501114 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075680660574 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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