Its include in parents responsibilities must do physical sports on dailybase the institution or acedmies should not waste
important time of students on gaming a part from their school lesson.i totally disagre with is openion it should be sole
responsibility of parents as well schools to provide better physically exercises or sports which make them active and healthy
sports are not wastage to time these are as neccessary as learning.
beside from other responsibilities of parents its also include in parents responsibility to ensure that their offsprings have regular physically exercise.parents should also spend time in playing games and sports with their children because primery institution of any child is home the thinks you teach them by doing themself they remain intouched with them whole the life.in now a day parents have not enough time to spend with their children and childrens are also like internet gaming which make them depressed and aggressive in behaviour such kind of youngones are more lonely and more antisocial kind of behaviour developed.parents should pay special attention and time like in japan their childrens are most intelligent one in the world but their sucide rate is highest in the world.parents should invest time on their children like money.
Alonge with educational responsibilities it is also responsibitity of educational institution to involve the students in gaming at school it is note wastage of time support teach them which course could not .game teach them sportman ship, tolerence and make them active physically as well as mentally.like in finland no text is teach till 7 year only teach them decipiline in life which bring open up their abilities .
parents should take in their special consideration of their childrens physically exercise and its not responsibility of teacher their only responsibilty to teach them is not true.Although, parents think its teachers responsibility and teacher thing vice versa but it is cummulative responsibility of bth parents and teachers also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...institution or acedmies should not waste important time of students on gaming a p...
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...isagre with is openion it should be sole responsibility of parents as well school...
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...ports which make them active and healthy sports are not wastage to time these are...
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...ponsibility of bth parents and teachers also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15701924429 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496875 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 20.2975951904 394% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.496221627 49.4020404114 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 434.5 106.682146367 407% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.0 20.7667163134 385% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304807992533 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198109519929 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119863846614 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165445179643 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070455903922 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.1 13.0946893788 337% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.18 50.2224549098 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.4 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 10.1190380762 336% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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