ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum.
To what extend do you agree?
Physical activity, which is proven to be essential for a healthy body and mind, is important for every person. It is argued that it is the parent’s obligation to ensure their children's recreational time, therefore spare the educational institutions of that burden, because it takes up too much of essential school tome. I strongly believe, physical exercising should stay within the educational curriculum, as it develops social skills from a young age.
To begin with, exercising is crucial for a healthy lifestyle. Implementing exercising in schools thru physical education classes or any sort of sport is the first step of demonstrating to the children the importance of being active. For example, a significant number of schools in Europe, started introducing qualified PE teachers from first grade just to accelerate the understanding how physical activity benefits the human body. As a result, obesity numbers are dropping in the younger population.
Secondly, playing any sport or exercising with a group has a positive impact on developing social skills. Helping each other to accomplish a physically challenging workout or playing against a different team creates unique social experiences that would not be able to recreate in a normal life situation. For instance, the emotions young people go thru from just playing any kind of sport and the bond they create with their friends just demonstrates how crucial physical activity is needed in school programs.
In conclusion, to be physically active is important to lead a healthy life and schools should not neglect all the positive segments it gives to the young ones while growing up.
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- ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum To what extend do you agree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31679389313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95685276344 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9534334647 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220732682798 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817234238292 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548780452872 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139534873395 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404612440709 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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