Entertainers get paid more than politicians.
What are the reasons for this?
Is this a negative or positive development?
In modern societies, it is observed that entertainers are paid invariably higher wages than politicians. As will be proven in the following essay, this development is positive and largely owing to the growth of technology and marketing.
Entertainment has become a lucrative industry for various reasons. Forefront among them is the relentless of various media outlets. The initial advent of TV, followed by CDs, streaming sites and downloadable apps on smart devices in the ensuing decades, has facilitated entertainers to reach audience on a progressively larger scale, who then purchase tangible products or pay subscription fees. Another element contributing to entertainers’ wealth is their profitable endorsement deals with brands. Artists with large fan bases like Mariah Carey are paid millions of dollars for appearing in ads for Pepsi or Tmobile.
The fact that entertainers are earning more is arguably a positive development. Entertainers in the past used to be looked down on and paid little. The elevation in their remuneration shows that their dedication and hard work are gaining more recognition from the public, which can inspire those with affinities for areas like Art or music to embrace and harness their talents. Also, though politicians ought to earn a decent living wage, politics should not be a money-driven profession. Should those in office focus more on amassing a fortune, they could abuse their political power for personal financial gains, damaging the integrity of their crucial work. In 2018, a number of Vietnamese officials were convicted for accepting bribery from parents to adjust their children’s test results, which sparked social outrage.
In conclusion, the pervasive nature of technology, compounded with marketable appeal, has upped entertainers’ earnings to a higher level than incomes of politicians. This development benefits entertainers, encourages self-acceptance in ordinary people and reinforce the professional boundary for politicians, who should not be compelled by monetary gains.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69706840391 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17035681691 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657980456026 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6797712637 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253524562426 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799407001049 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516948574964 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153318867133 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481198337221 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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