May people claim that we as ordinary people cannot do anything to improve today’s environmental concerns, but rather feel that government and huge industrial organizations are the one’s majorly responsible for this. I strongly disagree with this, and believe that it is a responsibility of both the parties common citizens and government or companies.
Firstly, if there had to be a change in people for environmental issues – it had to start with each one at home in the first place. We need to change the way we approach the environment issues. For instance, we have to reduce the usage of electric items such as Air conditioners, Fridges which are major producers of CFC gases. That being said, we can’t outweigh the role government and large companies play in reducing the damage to the environment. Government should encourage common people and bring forward laws on CFC producing product manufacturers which adds more pollution checks.
Secondly, people should obey the rules that government bring up inline to environmental issues. For instance, In India ‘Swach bharath’ has been considered as a revolution to bring cleanliness to different states and metropolitan cities. But, rather we can still see people throwing garbage everywhere – this has to punished with appropriate fines and should not be considered lightly by the government. On flip side large companies should also reduce the amount of waste they produce and opt to more recycling processes and be in line with all pollution acts.
In conclusion, I believe that it should be equal responsibility of common people and governments to reduce the environmental issues by getting forward together because ‘Together we go so far’.
- The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people How true do you think of it What is the best way to invest resources 81
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school Others however believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both views and give your own opinion 71
- Writing task 1 (a letter)You recently saw an advertisement about helpers for children summer holiday camp. Write a letter to camp organizers and say:– Describe the areas where you can help.– Give the time period you are available.– Ask some question 73
- the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 67
- You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:Say what the problem is.Describe the accommod 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to start with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35401459854 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1530840197 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4134807628 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329917455465 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119217870525 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789636484636 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208044517483 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202218504366 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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