May people claim that we as ordinary people cannot do anything to improve today’s environmental concerns, but rather feel that government and huge industrial organizations are the one’s majorly responsible for this. I strongly disagree with this, and believe that it is a responsibility of both the parties common citizens and government or companies.
Firstly, if there had to be a change in people for environmental issues – it had to start with each one at home in the first place. The steps we take towards the environment issues had to be changed. For instance, we have to reduce the usage of electric items such as Air conditioners, Fridges which are major producers of CFC gases. That being said, we can’t outweigh the role government and large businesses play in mitigating the damage to the environment. Government should encourage common people and bring forward laws on CFC producing product manufacturers which include more pollution checks.
Secondly, people should obey the rules that government bring up inline to environmental issues. For instance, In India ‘Swach bharath’ has been considered as a revolution to bring cleanliness to different states and metropolitan cities, but we can still see people throwing litter everywhere – this has to punished with appropriate fines and should not be considered gently by the government. On flip side large companies should also reduce the amount of waste they manufacture and opt to more recycling processes and be in line with all pollution acts.
In conclusion, I believe that it should be equal responsibility of common people and governments to reduce the environmental issues by getting forward together because ‘Together we go so far’.
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- the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 73
- the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to start with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36861313869 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18301952531 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2864405202 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336317405511 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125684628264 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718235248299 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208479498023 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202717760683 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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