Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regard to your children summer holiday camp advert Page – 2 in Economic Times dated 05th May 2018.
Let me introduce myself first – I’m XYZ living in ABC place nearby the location mentioned in the ad. I have been a volunteer at ‘Swach seva samiti’, a student lead NGO, in ABC for 5 years now. I know the areas DEF, GHI and JKL thoroughly due the activities we undertaken in all these three areas and I feel that I can help your free cause for the children and your team as well in organizing the summer camp without any hassle. I hope my experience could be of helpful. As coming to my availability, I am available from 05th May 2018 to 11th May 2018 (5 days), after which I would be out of town for some personal work.
Though we get all the accessories we need from the local shops, there still might one trouble in getting permission with the local government authority. Keeping that in mind I have few questions below.
• Do we have the authorized copy of permission request letter sent out to camp area land lord?
• Do we have all the safety precautions taken in place for the night fire?
Hoping for a positive reply.
Thanks and Regards,
ABC.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing the summer camp without any hassle. I hope my experience could be of helpful....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, so, still, well, i feel, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49775784753 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50155092756 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1769944038 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163207865776 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050126882789 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063606842324 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839254775856 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06929507828 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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