Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?
There has been a colossal upsurge in prodigies discussing the topic of the reasons and solutions that affect adversely to the environment. In the current years, this problem is alarming and become a thorny issue for all nations across the globe. In this essay, I will give some appropriate elements related to this negative phenomenon and imply a person should shoulder the responsibility for this.
First and foremost, the main factor that brings disadvantages to the biological environment is human activities in terms of constructing infrastructures, and industrialization. It is undoubtedly that logging, climate change, and the greenhouse effect stem from the side-effects of human activities due to a large amount of exhausted carbon dioxin from factories. Secondly, a thrown-away society causes a horrendous influence on the beauty of nature. People have a tendency to over-utilize the unnecessary products which waste the source of nature. Thirdly, because of the expansion of residents’ accommodation, more and more bushfires existed all over the world. For instance, years ago, Amazon forests are fired to serve the demand for settlement and enlarge the size of the Brazilian nation.
To tackle this problem, each individual should hold the duty in order to ameliorate our living conditions To be clear, the government and authority institutes can organize or invest more in the programs related to environmental improvement. Moreover, the government can enforce strict rules on the person who has abominable behavior to the ecology. For instance, the Singaporean government imposed a high fine on the individual regardless of region, age, etc who litter outside. That’s why this country came to the top of the cleanest country in the world. Furthermore, parents and schools should drive children about the merits and benefits that nature bestows us and the repercussion without its existence. Finally, people should raise their awareness about the danger of environmental destruction and protest the businesses that affected negatively to our fresh air.
To recapitulate, there is a wide range of factors that close us to this phenomenon, and a number of effective solutions to mitigate it. It is all stated that people should be conscious of the values of nature and cherish them as much as possible. In my opinion, every single person needs to give a hand to ease the environmental hazards in order to upgrade our living standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35751295337 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11781510475 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582901554404 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0451323925 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.888888889 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141551185554 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374996347035 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289091881042 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076479052487 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389860314279 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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