Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As human civilization advances, we encounter one of the most challenging problems ever witnessed in the history of humankind, the deterioration of the environment. The environmental degradation on a global scale has formed a widespread agreement that only cooperation among countries can be useful in improving the situation. In my opinion, I agree entirely with this view.
The primary rationale that calls for international effort in tackling environmental worsening is rooted in the world is built on the interdependence of ecosystems. Comprehensive knowledge is that people live in a global environment, share natural resources, and survive on the same biosphere. Any country's actions on the environment are bound to bring ramifications not only on itself but also neighboring countries. For example, in 2014, severe smog triggered by forest fires in Indonesia has polluted Singaporean air at record levels, affecting millions of residents.
Furthermore, only through concerted effort can the international community optimize resources invested in environmental protection. Some global issues such as global warming, air, and water pollution and the loss of biodiversity require government intervention. These issues are so enormous that there is simply no way to adequately address these problems without strong commitments from the governments of different countries. The Kyoto protocol, which was adopted in 1997 with the participation of 84 different countries to put a restriction on greenhouse-gas emissions, is an excellent example of how important international cooperation is in dealing with environmental issues. Nowadays, this protocol continues to have a world-wide effect on protecting nature.
In conclusion, cooperation between countries is inevitable in this global campaign, not only because the ecosystem is a unified mechanism but also because international engagement can make optimal use of financial and human resources. By collaborating, countries are able to protect the global environment with the least amount of resources.
- The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The line charts compare how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a car from 2000 to 2012. 61
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion. 78
- Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Advertising encourages customers to buy quantity, not in quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85666666667 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47994093181 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3485985342 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179713818192 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567654692285 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278105359279 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102099491212 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019890306282 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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