Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?
Some scientists predict that the resources of our planet will be exhausted in the nearest 30 years. Nowadays humankind began to realise how tragically environmental issues and climatic changes may influence the way of life of the world population, so some attempts to cope with such problems had been initiated. I believe that the efforts should be global and extensive, otherwise such tryings will remain inefficient.
First of all, current solutions, undertaken by the governments of countries all over the world, are disastrous due to its desultoriness and lack of varied and comprehensive approach to this question. The presidents, prime-ministers and international organisations are not able to reach an agreement on the exact methods of this struggle. The power of organisations is limited, so the authorities’ decisions can be hardly affected. For example, when the Baikal, the most famous lake in Russia, was in danger, Greenpeace sounded the alarm, movie stars and other activists were trying to draw attention to the problem of its pollution, but the government and businessmen did not react. In other words, everyone in each country should become united in the face of this adversity.
However, I still hope that some forms of solution do really exist and they can improve the climate and environment. Humans need to reduce the number of gases and harmful emissions, emitting into the atmosphere. That means that the quantity of factories, private cars and propane tanks, causing the greenhouse effect, must be shorten. For example, as a consequence of the 2 weeks quarantine, air pollution lowered, totalling twice weaker than it was previously, and the residents of the country admired the light blue sky. Thus, only vigorous actions result in successful outcome.
To conclude, cooperative and firm efforts only will reverse this situation and make a difference. As one famous song says: “Together we are strong” and together the populations will cope with environmental and climate problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, so, still, thus, for example, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04378317684 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659305993691 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6883499668 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196372711982 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484839494399 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483525616769 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968908703839 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498023305024 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.