Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no gainsaying the fact that many a country nowadays has taken up initiatives to solve the ever-increasing problems of the environment. Even though drastic measures are set in place, this menace is not being curbed. The reasons for this being: the lack of awareness in the individuals of the country and the huge budget required to keep the factors such as pollution and climate change in check. It is the need of the hour that effective solutions be implemented globally.
To initiate with the flaws that are hindering the success of the environment protection initiative. Primarily, the governments are taking necessary steps to control the pollution; however, it is not just the authorities that are responsible, individuals should also participate in the cause. Although, the governments are working towards the cause, they are not looping the locals who play a major role in this. For example, India started a solar energy scheme in 2018, but it was not very successful as not many people knew about it, should they have informed the inhabitants, it would be a success. Second to this is the fact that running pollution and climate control programs are not a budget friendly affair. This is because they require a lot of resources and manpower to go through till the end. Bangladesh for instance in 2012, loaned 2 millions dollars from the world bank for water reservoir constructions. Therefore, these problems need to be tackled precisely and each and every individual had better contribute to it.
Having said that the environmental issues are not solely to be solved by the governments and individuals should also participate. First and foremost, the more the government spends time on conscientizing the people, the more people will understand and support the cause. This is because it will help them in making an informed decision. Norway for instance in 2010, placed hoardings on the roads and ran t.v commercials informing the people about using electric cars to decrease pollution for which they would be incentivised , after which they saw a 22% decrease of gasoline cars on their roads. Moreover, this may not be a feasible option for many countries as most of their citizens belong to a lower socio-economic status, such countries can start a joint venture with local companies and help protect the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0703125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87561443419 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.063376338 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168569822394 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500485504078 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490551391496 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121741102939 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512176318686 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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