Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disargee?
It is often argued that only government are responsible for protecting the environment. I completely disagree with this opinion. In my view point, these problems must be solved by both politicians and individuals to get the best efficient actions.
We cannot deny the fact that environmental issues are a big barrier, which only cope with the participant of politicians. Environmental effects such as climate change, global warming, acid rain, violent storms or other extreme weather events, which influence on the whole of the earth. Therefore, only governments and organizations can address these issues. Secondly, environmental protection need a huge of money like special machine, modern technology, large numbers of experienced scientists. So that, the only person is government who have enough funds to tackle the threat.
On the other hand, parallel politicians, individuals also have responsibility to combat of environmental protection. Although residents can do too little, their contribution play an essential role in offsetting bad impacts on the Earth. For example, they can recycle trash into useful things, buy equipment using alternative sources. Moreover, with the cooperation of individuals and politicians, the problem about environment will control better. For instance, if farmers continue to burn forests for their own purposes, regardless of the government’s regulations, the problem of climate change will never be successfully mitigated.
In conclusion, I strongly believed that protecting environment is the obligation of both government and individuals.
- In developing countries children in rural communities have less access to education Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers While others think that the problem can be solve by providing computers and inter 73
- Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job whereas others advocate changing a job from time to time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Computer and online games are one the fastest growing trends in today s generation especially for children What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer and online games Discuss your point of view regarding this issue 89
- Some people regard video games as harmless fun or even as a useful educational tool Others however believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them In your opinion do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits 73
- Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sport Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of both government and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84482758621 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29553981006 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698275862069 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5524906559 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194486649656 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590411459578 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511592875317 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103801313053 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517781266999 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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