In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace, and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent do you agree?
It is often argued that it is more merits to employ the younger worker than these who were at the age of 50. I completely agree with this opinion. However, youthful employees will boost the success of the company.
On the one hand, although the older have a range of experiences, they are less active with the updated today. Firstly, the more age they had got, the more absent-minded they were. In other words, people who are in the age of over 50 will be less productive. For example, in the same issue, almost the elderly choose a long, endured which they summarized for the time before, instead of breakthrough and risky. Secondly, their health signs to decline. It seems that sitting lengthily, as well as, thinking logically, creatively is something overwhelmed for the elderly.
On the other hand, young staffs have strong effects on others. It cannot be denied that the speed and knowledge about new techniques of the younger generation. People find their interest in a new thing. As they have various urges such as open business, money, etc. Additionally, youngers have an intense to broaden their horizon, which is the key to more chances in the future. Furthermore, youthful laborers are very energetic, enthusiastic and so can react spontaneously to any situation put across them at work. Case in point, comparing to get a stable job, the young will desire the thing they really like. Mark Zuckerberg, who dropped out of Harvard University to perform his passion for computer and connecting community. And now, he has become one of the billionaires famous with Facebook that was the website with a thousand of users.
In conclusion, it appears to me that the positive impacts if the company hires the younger generation rather than the age of the people between 50 and 70.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89802631579 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66860263254 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1131136176 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3684210526 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185173181837 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462164405421 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546065104686 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113457834834 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294576609695 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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