Environmentol problems such os porrufion ond climotic votiolions ore
increosing nowodoys. The governmenls hove foken sorne rneosures ol
o gtobot level. Bul they got only few sorufions. Why is il so? How con lhis
problem be solved?
Saving the environment has become the top priority across the world. No country in the world disagrees
with the fact that the Earth is at the brink of a climatic disaster, but the measures taken neither have legs
nor the lengths to address the issue. This essay intends to look into why the measures have always fallen
short of the mark, and suggest some solutions to mitigate the problem.
The first reason why global measures have failed is that the developed world is shying away from the
burden it needs to bear for the damage it did to the environment in the colonial industrial revolution times.
Hence we are stuck in a limbo of bipolar world of developing nations on one side and the developed on the
other. And the compromises reached between the two have always been far from satisfactory. lf we need
to see a real positive change, the developed world has to do more than the developing world. lt cannot just
say that everyone should play an equal role. lt can do so by providing wealth and technology related to
renewable sources of energy to the developing and the least developed countries.
The second major reason of not being able to do for the environment is that our governments are acting in
the interests of powerful lobbies and corporations. For example, the fossil fuel industries are trillion dollar
businesses. lf clean energy succeeds, these giants would lose. The clout of these is so strong that instead of
acting with ambition and urgency, the governments are making feeble efforts. The solution, for this would
be to create awareness that fossil fuel industries have to step down to let the greener energies succeed.
Finally, development and environment are always seen at loggerheads with each other. Environment
always ends up taking a back seat to development. Thus, looking at the two as separate entities has
delayed and brought us to our current position. The answer to this is sustainable development, which is
development that meets the needs of the present, without compromising the environment.To sum up, it can be seen clearly, why the steps taken so far have failed to save the environment. However,
the time has come to do some soul-searching and take pro-active steps for the environment.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-22 | rupinderrai | 11 | view |
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it as valuable work experience Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Environmentol problems such os porrufion ond climotic votiolions ore increosing nowodoys The governmenls hove foken sorne rneosures ol o gtobot level Bul they got only few sorufions Why is il so How con lhis problem be solved 11
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility 73
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility 84
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it as valuable work experience Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... colonial industrial revolution times. Hence we are stuck in a limbo of bipolar worl...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lf
...have always been far from satisfactory. lf we need to see a real positive change,...
^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lt
...s to do more than the developing world. lt cannot just say that everyone should p...
^^
Line 10, column 46, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lt
...hat everyone should play an equal role. lt can do so by providing wealth and techn...
^^
Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lf
...stries are trillion dollar businesses. lf clean energy succeeds, these giants wou...
^^
Line 20, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...t, without compromising the environment.To sum up, it can be seen clearly, why the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, look, second, so, thus, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98680738786 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76600976237 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2571054462 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4736842105 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0410245431068 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0115794460632 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182977529215 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0125016130992 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188514004742 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.