In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it as valuable work experience Discuss both views and give your opinion

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...ers causing serious psychological issues for them .Moreover,there wages will be l...
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...ey often work for an additional income ,no matter how small .They want to he ind...
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...r despite it will neglect their studies .They should work on weekdays only and th...
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... only and the job should not come before studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, sort of, as a result, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27536231884 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10255804371 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.790804818 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.0 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4285714286 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.7142857143 7.06120827912 322% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143948632685 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715989770572 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349216240728 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461747975799 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037289123086 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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