Essay topic: In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries, some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether the government should limit the salary earn by few people or it is better for a country. While government should control the salaries under some circumstances, I personally believe that it is good for a country to have more people who earn high salaries.
On the other hand, there are some situations when government should control the salaries earn by the people. Firstly, it is true that these days many people prefer to invest in foreign countries rather than in their own countries. When people who earn a large amount of money are not contributing their money for country’s development, under developing countries take time to develop. Secondly, when these people do not pay enough amount of tax proportion to the money that they earn, government should limit their salary. Finally, if these people do not deserve high salaries according to their position in an organization, government should control their limit to earn high salaries.
On the other hand, we all know that many people do a lot of hard work to earn high salaries at early age. For instance, many film actor have to travel in many overseas countries in order to do shooting and they also work for more than 18 hours a day. Therefore, when people put a lot of hard work, people have right to earn high salaries. In addition to that, many students pay high education fees and educate themselves to earn high salaries. Thus, they should earn high salary as they give their time, money and hard work to achieve that.
In conclusion, When people contribute more proportion to the money they earn , it is good for a country. I believe that under some circumstances mentioned above, government should control the amount people earn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92567567568 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6049293258 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452702702703 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1473210323 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493657189103 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220813190495 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119377032745 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379793073744 0.151304729494 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113655500393 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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