Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
Since almost all countries gradually favored developmental cooperation, globalization has also proved its significance to the comprehensive development of the whole world, especially in terms of economy. Economical and social benefits that globalization bring to every country have been asserted for many years. However, there is still an argument that it may cause bad influence on the cultural identities of each country. In this essay, both sides of globalization will be discussed.
There is no denying that globalization contributes to the improvement of economy’s aspects and the quality of life in many countries around the world. Firstly, globalization helps to increase a huge amount of investment money into each country that leads to the stable circulation of money flow in the country and by that way, the chance of seeking a proper job will be opened to more people in the future. As a result, people’s lives will become better with high quality and even, have the tendency to own much more individual properties than ever before.
On the other hand, there has been worrying that globalization can affect profoundly on the cultural identities of each country. In particular, worldwide globalization may result in the strong interference of diverse cultures. As a consequence of that interference, traditional customs and heritages will be easily approached by other countries through the Internet or tourism activities. What’s more, in the same way, other cultures will have more opportunities to penetrate deeply into and neutralize any culture over time that makes the maintenance of state-owned customs more impossible.
To sum up, it can be indisputable that benefits of globalization are extremely substantial to the development of society in many countries. Besides, the preservation of national identities and intangible heritages should be considered thoroughly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, in particular, as a result, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55709342561 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26563314865 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4729114763 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19156596492 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673348171615 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428374891713 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112194688684 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212049973562 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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