It is true that globalization has influenced the economy around the world, and most industries are gained more opportunities to introduce their products to other countries by this tendency. However, this tendency also caused several local businesses that have been eliminated from this competition.
On the one hand, the most beneficial result for the economy is increasing sale through global interchange of goods. Trading companies could import their products across national wide and it will be a positive result to gain more revenue for the business and residents. For example, in Taiwan, the most famous smartphone brand HTC have successfully sale globalize wide, and more opportunities has contributed to the local economic and employment. As a result, this phenomenon certainly has it beneficial outcome to the country.
On the other hand, although globalization is an unbreakable tendency, it also considered to our local businesses that has affected by its drawbacks. Such as local farmer and small shop that have to against the price competition with those huge industries. Most consumers prefer to purchase cheaper products rather than supported their local businesses. For those local companies that have to reduce their profits in order to survive and it takes time and money to develop their global trading knowledge.
In conclusion, although globalization has bring outweigh benefits to the economic then negative, government can assist their local businesses in developing of trading strategy which essential in increasing economic as well as can helping to develop some potential companies.
- some people think women should be allowed to join the army the navy and the air force just like men To what extent do you agree or disagree 58
- Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment poverty and animal welfare than previous generations What is your opinion 56
- These days Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures Others argue that it is important to study at university Discuss both th 87
- An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs Why do you think so many children are overweight What could be done to solve this problem 61
- Some sports are extremely dangerous to the players Why do people participate in such sports Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
... conclusion, although globalization has bring outweigh benefits to the economic then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57317073171 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95450163526 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.255412152 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0827011628406 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342399174376 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03451416207 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049528882579 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180697053579 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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