Every year several languages die out some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree whith this notion?
Each year certain of tongue in the world was vanished and many people consider that is good for life. I totally disagree with this notion and think that disappear of tongue will bring impact for resident.
First of all, tongue was exist since a long time ago and that was became typical of some country. In other words, each countries have different characteristic and it was became strength for that state. Moreover, tongue is identity of region because of that all people will know where is this tongue come from and that distinct also can able to creating distinction from one region with another region. For instance, Korea is one of the most eminent country in the world because the popularity of the film and their Idol, we know if Korea tongue not International tongue, however every single person know their tongue foremost circle of teenegers and several of them focus and learn about their tongue. Thats why tongue is crucial in life because from this we know certain of tongue in the world.
Secondly, tongue is one of important culture in the earth. Tongue being the expensive heritage because from this some country can introduce their dwelling. On the other hand, tongue capable to wiped out each differences in the world. For example, English is International tongue and not all countries can use this tongue, whereas for communication with foreign people should be use this tongue even every event with International scale worldwide must use English tongue not their own tongue. Thus, tongue on of crucial history in world and each countries should be proud of their tongue.
To conclude, many tongue in the world can introduce some country and proved this cas should be conserved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...for resident. First of all, tongue was exist since a long time ago and that was beca...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...xist since a long time ago and that was became typical of some country. In other words...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ave different characteristic and it was became strength for that state. Moreover, tong...
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Line 2, column 702, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...hem focus and learn about their tongue. Thats why tongue is crucial in life because f...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...unication with foreign people should be use this tongue even every event with Inter...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tongue seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tongues'.
Suggestion: many tongues
...be proud of their tongue. To conclude, many tongue in the world can introduce some country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40097245855 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484320557491 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.850371544 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159181582463 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755302180109 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413500308205 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125900081729 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033190897581 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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