Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There has been a considerable debate over the disappearance of languages. Some people don't believe that this is a problem because with fewer languages our lives will be much easier, whilst others advocate and argue that the dying out of languages is important. I tend to agree with the second group for several reasons.
First of all, a language is a symbol of one country. It is also history and something very important for the whole culture of one society. For instance, imagine a country with an extinct language. It would become a community with disappearing values and history as well as wit...
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by losing a language the society be deprived of a lot more
by losing a language the society will be deprived of a lot more
this person definitely become smarter
this person definitely becomes smarter
Sentence: If they wish to find more about it, they will attend to understand a number of specifity of this language.
Error: specifity Suggestion: specified
Sentence: Naturally, there is only one advantage if there are a fewer languages and it is that the majority of people will understand each other without difficulty because it will be simplier to know the main things for several languages.
Error: simplier Suggestion: No alternate word
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