Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
From the beginning of the world's civilizations, languages are one of the most important part of our daily life. Each nation, tribe and country has their own way of communication, and has their own unique languages. However, not everything survives from the historical process. Every year, several languages die out. Although some people think that this is not a serious problem because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world, I do believe that the dying process of languages will not lead to an easier life.
To begin with, because of globalization and westernization of the Americans and Europeans, a wide range of people are forced to communicate in some international languages such as English, Spanish or French. It's undeniable that this has opened up chances for business interaction or diplomatic negotiation among nations or continents become easier. In the same way, when there are fewer languages, it would be easier and convenient for people to build up relationships, have a better understanding and spread out information or knowledge.
On the other hand, different societies have different languages. when languages die out, the connection between the past, present and future is cut. There are always traditions, cultures, lifestyles, knowledge, studies communicate through some special languages, despite the fact that we can translate them into our common languages, we are still unable to fully get the meaning and especially the attitude they carry.
Furthermore, languages are keys to culture, just as understanding and valuing cultural diversity are the keys to countering racism. All individuals must feel free to explore the uniqueness of their culture and identity while developing understandings of the cultural diversity that exits in the world around them. Undoubtedly, the only way to understand entirely the culture and traditions of a nation, a tribe or a country, is to understand their language - which is the inestimable property of the community. Language is complexly intertwined with the culture (the have evolved together, influencing one another in process, ultimately shaping what it means to be human). For instance, the Egyptian civilization was born because of language and communication.
To put it simply, as languages disappear, cultures lose. As languages disappear, parts of identity are lost. And as languages disappear, the diversity of world languages decreases. we preserve the endangered species because we want diversity, don't we? And that is also the reason for why languages die out do not lead to an easier life.
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period 80
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. 73
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career , while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, such as, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41769041769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0833986012 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552825552826 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0207591049 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472452125162 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137420047833 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150204503652 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251294515682 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174062304234 0.056905535591 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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