EX6: It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At present, the responsibility of the school is one of the controversial issues. Some people consider that school has a charge of teaching students to become a moral value person as well as should add formal education in school better. In my opinion, I total agree with this ideal.
It is clear that there are some reasons why the school should do that. Because environmental education has more influence for many aspects of students such as their thinking, their behavior, and their solve-problems due to school is also like the second house of them. Schools offer knowledge and skills as a tool to prepare for them more mature in the future. Therefore, most time of children spends to stay in school. They have environment learning while practicing together. Thanks to, they will grow up and raise their awareness of their behavior from teachers and classmate.
Furthermore, school is only to help us mature person, owing to teaching and knowledge as well as the experience of all teachers. Thus, adding formal education which has more challenging for students to face up, it makes students stronger in the future.
In conclusion, there are reasons as I mentioned above, I believe that it is an excellent combination of education and it will be better for students in the further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79782886626 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9788598766 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148991157188 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549761098957 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384335453691 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841473260943 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609778224555 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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