explain some of the ways in which human activities are damaging the environment. what can the government do to address these problem?
It is true that a wide range of terrestrial and marine animals are being threatened by negative human activities. There are several reasons why this is the case, and this essay will provide some measures to address this problem.
The disappearance of many species of animals is blamed on human activities. First of all, on the land, a vast of rainforest areas have been destroyed in recent years, which means species' habitat is being affected crucially. They find it difficult in finding a new home to live in as well as adapting to the new environment. These things put them at higher risk of extinction. In addition, due to been intended fishing and overexploitation in the sea lead to damage to the marine ecosystem. For instance, overexploitation could directly affect the species' food chain or even pare the diversity of species.
Some feasible actions can be taken by the government to preserve the ecosystem. The first one is that they impose stricter punishment on deforestation and overexploitation by heavy fines or prison sentences way, such as illegal logging. Moreover, the government can also apply " Green taxes " to the organizations and companies, which have behavior discharging wastes, wastewater, or even excess food into the rivers, and oceans without being treated prior.
In conclusion, there are undoubtedly some adverse consequences of this phenomenon, and the government can implement several methods to tackle this worrying trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28510638298 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05699592464 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6005451965 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186499569304 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562631260559 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418617994708 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100811361598 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261065163353 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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