The exploration and development of the safe alternatives to fossil fuel should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fossil fuel has popularized over the world because it is advanced and due to enormous resources. However, I would speculate that the global priority now is replacing fossil fuel by a clean and alternative energy.
There are several advantages of fossil fuel that made it essentially. Initially, this kind of fuel is available in the nature and distributed around the world in almost every nation. So companies or manufactories can have it easily by digging and appropriate approach, compared to other fuels which require complicated extraction. Many fossil resources has formed since millions years and they are tremendous which is favorable for commercial and providing energy. Secondly, scientists figured out advanced of fossil fuel which make it become unique and special. For instant, fossil fuel is easy to burn and after being burned, it left no trash or ash while some fuels like wood or timber do. In addition, the smoking from fossil fuel burden is fresh and cleaner than others. Consequently, people prefer using fossil fuel in generating electricity, running vehicles, operate factory, etc.
Besides, the drawbacks are also remarkable and significant. First of all, it causes carbon dioxide emission which considered harmful to environment. In fact, the burning of fossil fuel releases a huge amount of greenhouse gases that are the main factor of global warming and greenhouse effect. The common usage of fossil fuel posed problems to the government, scientists and environmentalist and leads to the controversy about replacement by alternatives energy like winds power, hydroelectricity, nuclear power, etc. Moreover, fossil fuel is limited and people have the responsibility to preserve and protect before it exhausted. By taking the fossil fuel from the ground, we actively destroy the nature, animal habitats and natural scenery. Unless we stop using this kind of fuel, the eco system will be unstable.
To summarized, I totally support the exploration and development of renewable energies, they should replace fossil fuel in order to protecting the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as for, in addition, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46913580247 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93732477742 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3232873388 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248879896313 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781302459358 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521057659065 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168980830212 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169860261292 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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