Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
Adventure sports have been becoming most popular, in recent years. Some people argue that the government ought to be banned. I completely disagree with the statement that skiing, and skydiving are too dangerous. I therefore believe that extreme sports should not be prohibited.
There are several actions sports such as base jumping, cliff diving, skiing and skydiving. These are not extreme dangerous as many people think. Firstly, all sports have risks indeed but they should follow the rules, regulations and safety measures. Hence, they can minimize their possible accidents. Secondly, who are willing to try such extreme sports must be guided by experienced trainers. For this government has to provide coaching centers as well as highly skilled trainers. So that the person learn required skills.
Finally, a person who is not well trained should not allow them to try as they would get fractures, so for them provide complete training till they become perfect. Consequently, the person who gets proper training can reach pinnacle. And this make their country to be proud.
While it would be possible to ban extreme sports as individuals are free to choose what sport they want to play. Although who plays such dangerous sports likely to build self- esteem, confident. Therefore, government should not ban extreme sports rather it should be encouraged. As a result, they feel satisfaction and fulfilment playing different sports.
To reiterate, however extreme sports such as skiing and skydiving seem to be dangerous. I believe that they should not forbidden as they gives risks bit ultimately boost their confidence, and strength.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ers as well as highly skilled trainers. So that the person learn required skills. Fin...
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Line 6, column 137, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... that they should not forbidden as they gives risks bit ultimately boost their confid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33461538462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61163475522 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0995996413 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.35 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361094133127 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111995076471 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115715246698 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21044869758 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988720976428 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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