failure is a key to success. do yo agree or disagree with the given opinion. give relevant examples to clarify your stand.
It is a universally acknowledged fact that a failure always learns a number of new things from his mistakes. History gives us a confirmation that behind the life of any successful person, there was a big role of his mistakes. So, I accede with the given notion that along with hard-work, failure is also a key to success.
To begin with, every person learns a new lesson from his faults. Every error bestowed him a new lesson. So that individual can never repeat the same mistake again. For example, Steve Jobs, the founder of the famous mobile company 'apple', was a failure in his early business life and he got fired from his own company by his colleagues. But he never became pessimistic due to his mistakes and learned new deterrent from every happening of his life. Therefore he became a successful person in this world.
Furthermore, any individual have to put all of his efforts with full of dedications to achieve his goals. Nothing is impossible across this whole globe because impossible itself give a clarification that 'I am possible'. For instance, Thomas Edison, the inventor of bulb failed several times in his invention but he never lose his hope to achieve his aim. Hence, failure is a path for the success.
At last, the conclusion of the above discussion is that without doing the mistakes nobody can able to learn new things to achieve his objective. So that's why failure is a necessary thing for every individual to kept him going at a well-worn path in his life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Every error bestowed him a new lesson. So that individual can never repeat the same mi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240418118467 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.121951219512 0.155533422707 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101045296167 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0348432055749 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0905923344948 0.0437548338989 207% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135888501742 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0174216027875 0.0403226058552 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.64848678466 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313588850174 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.114982578397 0.0861772015684 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00696864111498 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00696864111498 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1488.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72307692308 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334615384615 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230769230769 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142307692308 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111538461538 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64848678466 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.0653148922 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3333333333 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5262870828 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 40.4102564103 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.59154929577 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205465407457 0.332605444948 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100968792484 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0894882448866 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489013017427 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165446020636 0.148594505496 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908246399486 0.134430193775 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844456745044 0.0742795772207 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328554724148 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0164676287796 0.0638462369009 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158842099803 0.228012699653 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449785506531 0.058150111329 77% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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