It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing attention to the public education system funding. In fact, there are some who hold firmly their belief that children studying at private school's parents do not be demanded to pay taxes for supporting the state education system. However, others argue convincingly that private schools student's families should pay our share of money for this operation. As far as I am concerned, I entirely agree with the latter argument. Therefore, some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there is a primary point for people to defend their opposite view. There is no doubt that not all citizens utilise the services provided to the public by taxpayer's money. The most obvious example to prove is that many city-dwellers always turn their offspring to private school systems despite they pay taxes for the state-owned education facilities. It means they do not receive the welfare of public education systems.
On the other hand, there are two main evidences for other people to support the view that the families sending their offspring to private school should be demanded to pay our share of money that enhances public schools. First and foremost, it is a well documented fact that it is beneficial for all members in society so as to higher quality education system with equal oppotunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated force, and in turn a more productive and prosperious nation. For instance, a company leaders always need a qualified and competent staff, and obviously a funded education system can provide such employees. Equally important, There is no denying that it would be difficult to calculate correct amount of tax reduction for these family, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. For example, almost people are fortunate enough not to have to call police or fire brigade at any times in their lives, but they do not know amount tax reduction for this. Furthermore, it is commonly accepted fact that if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich. Ass the consequence, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening.
To conclussion, it is my strong belief that the familes turning their offspring to private school should be demanded to pay taxes to support public education systems. Accordingly, I highly recommend the governments should enhance people's awareness in term of welfare of this operation. If this recommendation will be carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generation will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing a...
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Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this operation' or 'these operations'?
Suggestion: this operation; these operations
...ilies should pay our share of money for these operation. As far as I am concerned, I entirely a...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'taxpayers'' or 'taxpayer's'?
Suggestion: taxpayers'; taxpayer's
... the services provided to the public by taxpayers money. The most obvious example to prov...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...ces public schools. First and foremost, is is a well documented fact that it is benef...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...s beneficial for all members in society so as to higher quality education system with eq...
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Line 5, column 648, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...tion system can provide such employees. Equally important, There is no denying that it ...
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Line 5, column 763, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this family' or 'these families'?
Suggestion: this family; these families
...ate correct amount of tax reduction for these family, and staff would be required to manage ...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ing. To conclussion, it is my strong believe that the familes turning their offsprin...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this operation' or 'these operations'?
Suggestion: this operation; these operations
...peoples awareness in term of welfare of these operation. If this recommendation will be carried...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07349665924 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70527728814 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523385300668 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.913060628 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375365584118 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106611460898 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929631692011 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246340445603 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650869482729 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.